Thursday, March 30, 2017

Week 10 Storytelling: A Land Before People




In a time before the was no floral or fauna on the earth plain. The Raven spent days walking and exploring this vast land. After seeing every nook, he started to long to see a change in how everything looked. Everything he saw looked bare.
He went to creation lake, where his mother made the earth plain from. There he took come mud first made a plant. He was fascinated with the colors he could add and so he ended up making millions of different kinds. Next, he wanted to produce something that would help the plants reproduce. He took more mud and shaped it into tiny creatures. Many of them flew but he liked the idea of the small creatures working together to make a big impact. He created the ants and the bees with that idea in mind. He wanted then to create some bigger animals that would make sure to keep all the plants around and eat the ones that grow too much. He created many different animals, deer included. When he was creating the deer, he shaped them and held them by their bellies but forgot to add any coloring so he put them down but they already had the breath of life in them so they went off before the Raven could do anything. The deer had only completely dried on it's belly so that is why they are white on the bottom and brown on their backs.
Once he finished creating all the animals he could think of he felt as though there was still something missing. He was worried about on type of animal over powering another so he wanted to create an animal that could think more broadly and can bring balance into the world and make sure nothing gets over eaten and breaks the circle of life.
This is where he created a girl. He created he as a small child that would grow quickly but that way he could show her everything he created and tell he how to protect it. He taught her about how the bees pollinate the plants that she eats and that she should keep animals away from them so they can pollinate everything. He taught her about how the deer eat plants and to make them move if they eat too much in one area. He also told her about the predators and to let them eat the animals that have had their time come. He taught her about the beauty that the world had to offer her and she fell in love with his creation. She enjoyed everything for years but noticed that she wanted someone like her so she would not have to enjoy and experience everything alone.
She went to ask the Raven to make a partner for her. He did so and created a man but made him full grown so she would not have to wait for him to age. The woman was happy and taught the man everything she knew hoping that he would share the same love for nature that she had.


Author's note: this comes from the first two stories of the Alaskan unit:
The Raven Myth: Raven's Creation
The Raven Myth: Raven Creates the People
 where the Raven creates the world with humans. The story makes it as though the world is made for humans since a man was the first to be created but I wanted it to seem like humans should be the protectors of earth. 



Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Week 10 Reading notes: Alaskan Legends Part A

I like the first few stories of the Raven creating everything. Or the one where he marries a goose but then they leave him behind because he is not fast enough. I would like to make a story out of the part where the Raven was creating the world. and make it through his/her point of view and they do it because they are lonely and the want something to take care of. I would like to use the picture below to give the imagery of the beginning of the creations the Raven make.





The unit I read was the Alaskan Legends unit

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Story planning Week 9:The Sioux Legends

I want to try to combine two stories into one. I really like the Mysterious Butte Story in that it told the future and I really like the story of the fat man being chased by the spiders because he was able to hid from them in the trees and trick them. I want my story to incorporate both those aspects.

I wanted to maybe have the antagonist as an evil tribe leader and the Mysterious butte foretells his demise but to try and stop it he tries to kill the man (or woman) that is supposed to make that happen. When they are being chased, they could run up to the trees and the evil tribe leader would be fooled their reflection. Upon further research, I found that Native American stories try not to have "evil" people in them. The stories are meant to be lessons to children and so the main messages in most stories are that people can do evil things but can be redeemed for it. Granted there are evil spirits in them but they usually do bad and good. The reason for that is to teach kids  that there are things that you will never know if they will do you harm of help, or both.


I would like to slightly change my story in that the Tribe leader has become cruel due to being in power for so long and then the mysterious butte prophesies his death and he tries to stop it but someone shows compassion (probably amid him trying to kill the person that is supposed to kill him) to him and he starts to remember his old ways and goes back to them and the Mysterious Butte changes and all is good. I’ll try to display the meaning of the story as, you are in charge of your actions and only you can choose what your future is. 


This story will stem from The Mysterious Butte from the Sioux legends.  

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Reading notes: Sioux Legends, Part B

"pemmican" is a mixture of fat and meat, such as buffalo meat or venison I like the first story and believe I can use the part about the reflection and put it into another story.

Unktomi- spider




The last story is good.It would be fun to change up the story in who fights, maybe giving the story a moral meaning.


This reading note come from the Sioux unit


Monday, March 20, 2017

Week 9 Reading notes: The Sioux Legends, Part A

wei-zi (coarse buffalo skin, smoked).

I like the story of the mysterious butte. That it acts like a prophet it can really be changed into any story. maybe combine two stories into one.  

The turtle story is an interesting one as well, maybe if I could change up the ending I could give a few more meanings to the story. 

Notes from the Sioux Legends

Wednesday, March 8, 2017

Week 8 Growth Mindset


I try to bring in the growth mindset when I can but most the time its stuck on the back burner. Especially when I am distracted by my hectic schedule. One key point I have mastered in this class as well as in my other classes is that I never think that I am "not good" at something but rather sucking is the first step at getting good at something and I just need to spend a little more time on it. In most the things I do, I do use internal motivation when I am excited about something but when I feel like it is not necessary I need outside sources of motivation.

Monday, March 6, 2017

Week 8 Reflections

My favorite story I have written so far is The Voyages of Sinclair, I already had the idea of doing it and just needed to know what stories of Sinbad that I wanted to include in my remake. I am still experimenting on how to do my reading notes but what works for me best is to write down any possible ideas and things I want to research and most of the time I can remember what I wrote and do not need to look at them again. (BUT I forget everything I don't write done so they are helpful in that respect.)

I am really excited about my storybook. I am afraid on how I am going to get my thoughts and expectations of it to my audience though. having constant comment on it does help though.

My favorite types of stories are the gender reversal stories or the ones where the females end up being the heroines.