I which that they went more in depth about the Sirens. I feel as though there was no drama or suspense in that part of the story, but I do think there was more in the longer version. A good story rewrite might be to see what would actually happen if the men where entranced by the Sirens instead of being able to pass them quickly.
I like the picture above because of how her face looks. To other she seems like a horrible person but in her own eyes, she might have felt that killing her husband is what needed to be done.